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http://www.xanga.com/nopoverty ^ My Site

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Not enough time to wait to get into this space.

> Even though it's a dream thats going to be almost impossible by myself, I want the North Korean refugees to be set free. Live in another country legally. And not actually starve to death with no one helping them. If my project is not succesful, I will give my best after joining LiNK > The pictures of the starving kids, the information of the amount of food, comparing South Korea and North Korea. These big things make this project have a hope of being succesful. Pictures speak a thousand words, starvation is one of the worst ways to die, and we are living peacefully while 30 km above me people are dying painfully. > My video because it was my first time doing this kind of thing. I couldn't put in the videos I saw to make it more dramatic so it's all pictures and a song. > Using xanga, facebook, and of course youtube. Xanga is like a blog, which I already created for this project. So far I only wrote two entries but I'll gradually write more. Facebook, you can make a group which people join if they like the title. I'll try to make the title as interesting as possible to get more members. Youtube, with my video you can see all these sufferings through pictures and a nice sad song. > I want to have better figurative language next time. Figurative language has a magic that hooks readers if it's used correctly. I want to master that next time I do this kind of thing.
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 * 1) Discuss what you see when you compare your first draft (solo), which did not require figurative language (analogies, metaphors, etc), with your second one. Be specific. Tell yourself, and us, what you want to remember the next time you write something you want to have an effect on your reader.