Hyungmo's+discussion


 * 1) What specific purpose or "change for the better" are you hoping to accomplish with this product? **After my accomplishment with this project, I hope that people will be able to make their own decision for healthy foods.**
 * 2) What do you think is/are the most effective detail(s) for achieving your purpose? **The most effective detail, I think is every time people purchase junk foods, they cause some unpleasant result.**
 * 3) What do you think is the weakest aspect of your project? **I think our production lacked many of serious facts. Also rather than making changes in the world campaign, it was more like advertisement.**
 * 4) What 21st century tools (yes, we're talking "web 2.0"--wikis, blogs, YouTube, etc) do you think could help you to spread your message or idea to the world? How would you picture using these to increase your power to make a difference? **Tools like youtube or wikis are very powerful. Especially for Youtube, many people from different countries are watching what other people made it would be very easy to express their passion. making difference is easier. But it's whether you do it or not.**
 * 5) Discuss what you see when you compare your first draft (solo), which did not require figurative language (analogies, metaphors, etc), with your second one. Be specific. Tell yourself, and us, what you want to remember the next time you write something you want to have an effect on your reader.**Well, there are a lot of things to remember if I am to write something effective to reader.** **When I compared my first and second draft, the second draft showed more about me as a writer. i think that's what figurative language is for.**