John's+discussion


 * 1) What specific purpose or "change for the better" are you hoping to accomplish with this product? People eating fast food rather than slow healthy food and getting fatter and fatter all the time. **Also the fast food restaurants who sell fast foods even they know that it is not really good for people's health**
 * 2) What do you think is/are the most effective detail(s) for achieving your purpose? I **think it is the obesity of children with trans fatty acids that makes people over weigh in a short time.**
 * 3) What do you think is the weakest aspect of your project? **The good parts of the fast food, it is fast, delicious and confortable for us to eat.**
 * 4) What 21st century tools (yes, we're talking "web 2.0"--wikis, blogs, YouTube, etc) do you think could help you to spread your message or idea to the world? How would you picture using these to increase your power to make a difference? making pictures video was a fun experiment as well as learning. **It made and looked really differently after looking it at the end. We could upload to many different sites and spread it.**
 * 5) Discuss what you see when you compare your first draft (solo), which did not require figurative language (analogies, metaphors, etc), with your second one. Be specific. Tell yourself, and us, what you want to remember the next time you write something you want to have an effect on your reader. **I think I should have put some figurative languages and put more pictures because I think the picture gives us and them the idea of what is happening in the easier way.**