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B Period



media type="custom" key="78398" This video is soundless...so check out the Powerpoint if you want the sound. Don't rush and click fast during the SlideShow...

http://kisblogs.org/acehuskyuno


 * What specific purpose or "change for the better" are you hoping to accomplish with this product?

I am not aiming for a major change. I am hoping for a little change in the families. I would be glad if a family watches my video, considers and actually think about it and discuss among them.


 * What do you think is/are the most effective detail(s) for achieving your purpose?

The analogy about the bird. It should touch people's feelings.


 * What do you think is the weakest aspect of your project?

The soundless video...


 * What 21st century tools (yes, we're talking "web 2.0"--wikis, blogs, YouTube, etc) do you think could help you to spread your message or idea to the world? How would you picture using these to increase your power to make a difference?

Youtube is a big one, because everybody watched it. Everybody can leave comments and the creater can see how many people watched it.


 * Discuss what you see when you compare your first draft (solo), which did not require figurative language (analogies, metaphors, etc), with your second one. Be specific. Tell yourself, and us, what you want to remember the next time you write something you want to have an effect on your reader.

It was totally different after adding those figurative speeches, especially the extended analogy. I also liked the metaphor I used in the end. I just thought it was a really nice way to end the video...I would just remember the difference the figurative speeches made to my project.