Jin+Soo+-+The+Spreading+Death

media type="custom" key="78318" Sometimes the presentation gets all screwed up, some of the pictures don't show up and the wrong pictures show somtimes (I don't know why. You can figure it out by common sense) so please bear with me, I had a nightmare with Spresent. Also, for the slides which I put the animation 'Blinds' on, sometimes they turn red. Just ignore that.

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 * __Revisions__**

I wasn’t expecting for the smoking results to stop immediately but I hope that I can at least reduce it. Even if it is just one person. I think the most effective detail is the Top, Mop and Stop. It’s easy to remember plus it rhymes so making it almost impossible to forget the three words. Even if you forget the things that you’re supposed to think about, it’s still easy. Top: you want to be the best and so you can feel better. Mop: what do you do with a mop? Clean! So, clean you’re mistakes! Stop: this is the whole reason of doing this. Stop smoking. I think the weakest aspect of my project was the beginning. It didn’t grab much attention. I could add a photo of someone suffering from cancer and say “This is not who you want to be”. I think Flash would help spread my message. Nowadays, you can do cool things like visual effects. So for mine, I would have a picture of a normal man but then he starts to smoke and do a fast forward of his life and slowly show his body decaying. Don’t underestimate the power of figurative language. Always add it and don’t have second thoughts about it.
 * 1. What specific purpose or "change for the better" are you hoping to accomplish with this product?**
 * 2. What do you think is/are the most effective detail(s) for achieving your purpose?**
 * 3.** **What do you think is the weakest aspect of your project?**
 * 4. What 21st century tools (yes, we're talking "web 2.0"--wikis, blogs, YouTube, etc) do you think could help you to spread your message or idea to the world? How would you picture using these to increase your power to make a difference?**
 * 5.** **Discuss what you see when you compare your first draft (solo), which did not require figurative language (analogies, metaphors, etc), with your second one. Be specific. Tell yourself, and us, what you want to remember the next time you write something you want to have an effect on your reader**.